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sarlou
Junior Member

since 2008-03-23

Posts 16
burnley,lancashire,england

0 posted 2008-03-23 05:02 PM

my grandad passed away last year and i wrote this poem for his funeral although i couldnt bring myself to read it out. my nan hasnt heard it yet but i have had it laminated and it is going on his headstone.... hope you like it...

SO HEAVEN HAS RECEIVED ANOTHER ANGEL
THE NIGHT SKY ANOTHER STAR
YOUR LIFE HAS BECOME A LOVING MEMORY
I KNOW YOU WILL NEVER BE FAR

I KNOW YOU ARE WATCHING OVER ME
AS MY LIFE GOES ON
I WILL TREASURE THE MEMORIES I HAVE OF YOU
I CANT BELIEVE YOU'RE GONE

YOU WERE A LOVING CARING GRANDAD
YOU WERE THERE FOR ME A LOT
YOU WILL ALWAYS HOLD A PLACE IN MY HEART
A LOVING TREASURED SPOT

YOU WERE REALLY ONE IN A MILLION
A CUT ABOVE THE REST
ALL THAT KNEW YOU WOULD AGREE
YOU SIMPLY WERE THE BEST

SO GRANDAD I WILL SAY GOODBYE
I LOVE AND MISS YOU WITH ALL MY HEART
BUT AS LONG AS I HAVE MY LOVING MEMORIES
WE WILL NEVER BE TOO FAR APART.

Nan

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

1 posted 2008-03-23 07:41 PM

This is a lovely tribute to an undoubtedly wonderful man - Well done, and welcome to Passions in Poetry ...

Larry C

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since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

2 posted 2008-03-24 01:26 AM

sarlou,
Yes a lovely tribute. He would have been proud. Peace to you for your courage and understanding. And welcome to Passions.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane,
I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

hunnie_girl

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since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

3 posted 2008-03-24 02:44 AM

awe he wood have been proud to read this poem such a lovely poem hunn. and Welcome to Passions

Krysti

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

4 posted 2008-03-24 07:49 AM

A beautiful poem~~

Welcome,
M

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

5 posted 2008-03-24 10:17 AM

SarLou~
This is so tenderly done~
I am certain that your Nan would love to see it too~

Welcome to this ever-growing circle of poets and friends~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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sarlou
Junior Member

since 2008-03-23

Posts 16
burnley,lancashire,england

6 posted 2008-03-24 04:30 PM

thank you everyone for your lovely comments, I can only write about things I am really passionate about. You were right he was a wonderful man. and just so u know i chose my message icon because my grandad had a tattoo of a swallow on his hand and although i dont think that is a swallow it kinda looks like one

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