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redwriter1 Member
since 1999-07-22
Posts 480Franklin, TN ![]() |
Mommy went to heaven but I need her here today My tummy hurts and I fell down I need her right away Operator can you tell me how to find her in this book? Is heaven in the yellow part? I don't know where to look I think my daddy needs her too at night I hear him cry I hear him call her name sometimes but I really don't know why Maybe if I call her, she will hurry home to me Is Heaven very far away Is it across the sea? She's been gone for a long,long time she needs to come home now! I really need to reach her I simply don't know how Help me find the number please, is it listed under "Heaven"? I can't read these big big words I am only seven I'm sorry operator, I didn't mean to make you cry, Is your tummy hurting too? or is something in your eye? If I call my church maybe they will know Mommey said when we need help that's where we should go I found the number to my church tacked up on the wall Thank you operator, I'll give them a call *****If i can't find the author I would like to edit this story into a song (smile) |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
We seem to be having a discussion about poems posted on other sites, either from authors here [without their permission] or others who have posted to the Main Site at Passions. I found the above poem here http://fp5.in-tch.com/www.fathershands.com/yellowpages/ but for some reason, I get the feeling I have read it here, before, by someone else. Redwriter, I am moving this to the Alley for further discussion. Thanks. |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
I recall reading it as well, but I'm not sure if it was here or if someone emailed it to me. ~Sheri "The things that come to those that wait may be the things left by those who got there first" |
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Ariana Senior Member
since 2000-10-08
Posts 571Orlando, Florida |
I read it before too, it was emailed to me and it might have come from Yahoo. |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
This poem just made me cry ![]() "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S. |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
using smart search here in pip, it seems like it's been posted twice here in passions. one in open#6 and the other in teen#2. Both poster's say it's not their poem and just wanted to share it....so it's still anonymous "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S. |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
I've gotten this one through emails many times. Though I don't know the author of it. |
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Looks like redwriter found a ghostwriter ![]() I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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ma miller Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 806 |
Donna Groleau is the author |
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