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Aroas
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since 2003-10-28

Posts 8

0 posted 2003-10-28 04:48 PM

Hello everyone...

let me introduce myself. I am Karim Khan (Aroas)
and i have been searching for various poetry sites and i found a couple of good ones and this is one of them.

Before you continue reading this message, please read them carefully and go in to his/er perspectief and feel what they feel at that moment, if you do that then you can feel like me

thats for now....
Rain

While i am standing here
all alone
waiting for some one
waiting for a girl

Its raining
no sunshine anymore
just pain
pain that stays

with out knowing
she is waiting for me
waiting in the rain
outside

cold
the wind blows
so cold
don't leave me alone
please...

don't leave me
all alone...
in the rain

Ringo

Member Elite

since 2003-02-20

Posts 3684
Saluting with misty eyes

1 posted 2003-10-29 01:46 AM

don't leave me
all alone...
in the rain
********************************

How many times I have asked this same thing.
Welcome to Passions!!!!!!!!!
I definately feel your writing will be a very welcome addition to our site.

We are all equal but we’re individually different
and able to reach the impossible if we try.

Aroas
New Member

since 2003-10-28

Posts 8

2 posted 2003-10-29 04:50 AM

Thanks,

I'm very happy that you have accepted me

and glad that you also feel the same,
i will be writing more and more, all made with love, if you want i have ICQ and msn, you can contact me anythime anywhere
ICQ: 243773210
MSN: mxmsw@hotmail.com

greets, Karim

Alicat
Member Elite

since 1999-05-23

Posts 4094
Coastal Texas

3 posted 2003-10-29 10:53 AM

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Alicat
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