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Wind
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0 posted 2003-03-09 02:57 PM


when you look at the clouds, do you see things in them? sometimes I can see faces, but when I try to look colser, they melt away.

the Wind is invisible.
        remeber me

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1 posted 2003-03-09 03:29 PM


Wind, yes, I see things in the clouds all the time. I guess if you are looking for something you will see it! I wrote this poem based on my granddaughter seeing angels in the clouds! This was based on actual events and conversation, I just put it to rhyme. I often think back on this day and it always brings me a great big smile!


Afternoon Delight

Hey, look up there, up in the sky, an angel’s floating by
With pretty puffy wings ‘n’ curly puffy hair, oh my,
I hope someday God gives us pretty wings so we can fly
And bounce around all day on puffy clouds up in the sky.

(That would be wonderful, Nicole!)

You shoulda seen my friend today, oh boy, did he look cool
He wore a leather jacket, boots and shades today to school
I think he really likes me ‘cause he sat close to my stool
And said, “when it gets hot again, come to my swimming pool.”

(Watch over, Lord, my sweet Nicole!)

My tummy’s hungry, needs a snack, can we stop by the store?
Can I get chocolate pretzels, chips, and maybe one thing more?
I’ll do my homework really good, right down here on the floor
See all these stars? My teacher said good work is what they’re for.

(My shining star, you are, Nicole!)

She said to study good tonight, tomorrow is our test
My homework’s done, can I watch ‘toons’? They are the funniest
I’m not a baby, don’t take naps, but maybe I’ll just rest
And wait for Mommy to get here…oh, Mom-Mom, you’re the best…
…zzzzzzzzzzzzz

(I love you too! Sweet dreams, Nicole!)

1/11/2000



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2 posted 2003-03-09 04:49 PM


I see all sorts of things...faces and shapes an animals and everything!

Every heart has hidden treasures...a secret wish, a silent dream, and a cherished love. [Unknown]

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3 posted 2003-03-09 05:19 PM


I see a lot of dragons
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4 posted 2003-03-09 10:03 PM


I see ships floating in to pick up the souls of our loved ones and carry them to heaven.

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

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5 posted 2003-03-19 09:18 PM


I see dead people...

Nah. More like popcorn.


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6 posted 2003-03-20 11:56 AM


Inscrutable omens. (with a nod to Bill Watterson)
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7 posted 2003-03-20 02:49 PM


I see the heavens beyond :-)
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