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ncf31088 New Member
since 2003-02-08
Posts 4 |
Ok there is this girl, Her name is Lisa. we've been going out for almost a month now. I need some suggestions for a poem to write for her. She is the most perfect girl ive ever met. she is unbelievebly beautiful and she smells like a rose (but better). i love her so much. Her eyes are big, blue, and very beautiful and her hair is silky smooth. everything is perfect about her. can someone give me some ideas? thanx. |
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ncf31088 New Member
since 2003-02-08
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This is what i have, suggestions are highly appreciated: You are the most perfect person ive ever met. you are unbelievebly beautiful and you smell like a rose (but better). i love you so much. your eyes are so beautiful and your hair is smooth like silk. everything is perfect about you. And i cant believe you chose me to be the lucky guy as your boyfriend. I love you baby. i love you more than anything. |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
Sounds like you're the lucky one ... she's everything under the sun perhaps try words of the heart that is always a good place to start. but for love being timed ... try breaking up rather than rhymed. Above all, the words must be felt and true for their meaning to carry to her from you. |
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NeverSayDie Junior Member
since 2001-01-18
Posts 39Duluth, MN & Grand Forks ND |
This is going to sound really corny, but write from the heart. Cause for the most part you know what you want to say already. Just think about her and write it. Good Luck  |
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