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feeblemindedfool New Member
since 2003-11-26
Posts 5 |
staring into a crowd feelings of belittlement faces there, lives unknown emotions of love, happiness and sadness problems of the times apparent ocassional smirks and fits of laughter cries and disgust hidden deep creased clothes and groomed hair inside deep hurt and thoughts of despair society suffers under a goal of bliss seek the wonderful, hope to succeed realize the truth, prepare for it, understand it truth is quiet, appearances are loud I see these things, staring into a crowd |
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tecoyah Member
since 2003-11-16
Posts 83NY |
This piece has none of the forced rhyme troubles of "intensity"...good work, enjoyable. thanx |
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feeblemindedfool New Member
since 2003-11-26
Posts 5 |
thank you very much, I appreciate you taking the tiem to respond |
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