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Critical Analysis #2
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colifer
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since 2003-09-20
Posts 37
Ohio
0 posted 2003-10-25 07:16 PM


shoo, shoo, the wild berry flows
it's bend, not too deep.
aye, my lover is sound asleep.
the wood, consumed in peace
list'n, list'n, the music plays
happy growing wilder
there, shallow, breath through life
the adult saved...the child.
'lo, 'lo, greeting trees
rough skin is bark
I wish, wish, it wasn't dark
welcome...nature's heart.
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Marty Baird
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since 2003-09-20
Posts 90
Georgia, U.S.
1 posted 2003-10-26 07:37 AM

Well I may like it because I have celtic linage
or because of the poem itself just not certain. However can say  I felt it was worth reading
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