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Critical Analysis #2
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kadafi09
Member
since 2003-06-17
Posts 143
California, United States
0 posted 2003-08-26 01:42 PM

Cocaine!
You are tearing us apart!
Your influence drives me insane!
Have you no heart?
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Tequilia_Sunrise
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since 2003-02-19
Posts 612
Lochalsh, Ontario, Canada
1 posted 2003-08-26 03:28 PM

I get the idea of what you are trying to say and its short and simple, but maybe you could go on about your experinces with the drug or the troubles you have had with who ever had the problem. This is a very touchy and personal subject but is somthing I think should be writen about much more, people need to be made aware of the stresses and hart ache this like this could cause. Acutaly this might be a good subject to bring up in the Teen poerty fourm.
This a great start to somthing that could be very touching and educational but that is my thoughts only.

THANK-YOU

Tequilia

kadafi09
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since 2003-06-17
Posts 143
California, United States
2 posted 2003-08-27 10:04 AM

thank you for your comments tequila
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