Critical Analysis #2 |
Candy-Coated |
Ladybug Member
since 2003-06-17
Posts 236Massachusetts |
(Not my usual style, just trying to summon my muse ) Honey drips from his fingers, Sticky sweet syrup – gently stinging my eyes with its amber glow. Sugary lips coat my heart in a saccharin web Motionless, I melt from the burn of the honey glaze. Every new beginning comes from some other beginning's end... [This message has been edited by Ladybug (07-02-2003 12:07 PM).] |
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kadafi09 Member
since 2003-06-17
Posts 143California, United States |
it was cool. i liked it. |
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Ladybug Member
since 2003-06-17
Posts 236Massachusetts |
Thanks, Kada Every new beginning comes from some other beginning's end... |
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