Critical Analysis #2 |
Deep_Down |
~DreamChild~ Senior Member
since 2001-04-23
Posts 544in your dreams |
the day is new; so a smile for you and cheer and laughter galore but below the surface deep down in my heart there is always so much more more than just smiles and joy and cheer there's sadness and pain confusion and fear so don't always assume that one's life is all well what you see on the outside is not enough to tell there's always more than meets the eye hidden from view deep down inside Freedom is the dream of sleeping reality |
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D'sWhisper Member
since 2003-06-16
Posts 68Washington, USA |
Some of the most beautiful people I know have stones slung from shallow judgements every day. This is great in it's telling, you did an awsome job IMHO. ~DW~ |
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Ladybug Member
since 2003-06-17
Posts 236Massachusetts |
Hi DreamChild, very well done. There is always more than meets the eye. Every new beginning comes from some other beginning's end... |
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