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kauai
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since 2003-05-18
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0 posted 2003-05-19 01:56 PM


The Lakes are flooding and I know not why,
I balled up my fists and started to cry,
Solitude is your enemy, when the worlds not your friend,will thoughts of inadequacy cease to end?
When you're in the river, it's bigger then it seems
Take a couple steps back, it's only a stream.
The storm is over, el nino is gone,
Now time to wait for el nina to spawn.

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