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Spell of Stars

Essorant
Member Elite

since 2002-08-10

Posts 4769
Regina, Saskatchewan; Canada

0 posted 2002-12-11 03:17 PM

Spell of Stars

The universe, embroidered space
I read as traits of our own grace-
our touring souls have wayfared far
and left as telltale each gold star
Wherein we shall read back the way
whence we came to invent the day
and bind ourselves in volumes of
forgetfulness and vagues of love.
A tome in time wrought by usself
the brightest bible on the shelf
we are to worlds of mortal birth
but to the sky eternal worth.

[This message has been edited by Essorant (12-12-2002 03:56 AM).]

Radrook
Senior Member

since 2002-08-09

Posts 648

1 posted 2002-12-12 05:20 PM

I like the poem.
Why not write a free-verse version so as to make a comparison between the twain?

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