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Radrook
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since 2002-08-09

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0 posted 2002-09-24 05:28 PM

[This message has been edited by Radrook (09-25-2002 12:38 AM).]

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

1 posted 2002-09-25 06:37 AM

now that is indeed an editing job.... have done that to many of the poems I wrote...and in my case it made them better...in this case... I'm not so sure. I dropped in last night and read this..wanting to think about it before I commented. Drop in this morning and find you indeed have edited it to the bare essence of a beginning..

Not A Poet
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since 1999-11-03

Posts 3885
Oklahoma, USA

2 posted 2002-09-25 09:30 AM

This takes to the ultimate the trend started a couple of weeks ago by Essorant. Talk about minimalism! WOW!

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