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Monk Frost I!
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0 posted 2009-02-22 08:53 PM


Lost of the past are thee
Blinded by the ego of thou
Foward unto the future
Lower thy brow


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tao power
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since 2009-02-24
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1 posted 2009-02-24 03:18 AM


this poem is very cool.  much contained in a small space.  using antiquidated language to speak to someone who had lost their past is like a smart-ass slap in the face.  And to suggest that the future will require our de-evolution is pretty smart.  The modern man is indeed getting dumber.
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