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Critical Analysis #2
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Monk Frost I!
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since 2008-06-15
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0 posted 2009-02-22 12:46 PM

Stare into a mirror
Through a single pane of glass
Adore the reflection
For your image will soon pass
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Essorant
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since 2002-08-10
Posts 4769
Regina, Saskatchewan; Canada
1 posted 2009-02-22 11:24 AM

Heed ye Narcissus' sample here
A haftling turned by selflove's mere
He shunned the maid he ought adore
And loved his self-reflection more,
In the which appetitious thought
That witsick wight his death begot.
But yet upon his lifeend's hour
He left behind a lovely flower.
turtle
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since 2009-01-23
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2 posted 2009-02-22 12:28 PM

Essy,

That's a keeper.

Well done
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