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The Basics Of Rhyme (link)

turtle
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0 posted 2009-02-16 08:41 PM

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Balladeer

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1 posted 2009-02-16 09:19 PM

Very informative, Turtle, and I'm sure a lot of people can benefit from this information.

I'm not sure this is the right forum for it, however. Critical analysis is for critiquing poems, as far as I know. The moderators here will be able to advise better on that point.

If they ask you to move it, permission is granted to place it in the poetry workshop.

Falling rain

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2 posted 2009-02-16 09:20 PM

Finally! I understand the meaning of Meter and "foot". Well I understand it but it'll be trouble some to add that in my writing. Oh well.

Practice, practice, practice! right?

-Zach

When I see your smile, and I know it’s not for me, that’s when I’ll miss you.

turtle
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3 posted 2009-02-16 09:26 PM

Thanks Balladeer.

Yes, I was a liitle weary of posting this here. Brad, or not, I'll move this to the workshop

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oceanvu2
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4 posted 2009-02-20 08:42 PM

Hi Turtle: One way of avoiding assorted textual errors like "weary" for "leery" is to write outside the box in Word or whatever, read it, and spell check it. It adds credibility.

Of course, I ignore my own advice all the time.

Best, Jimbeaux

turtle
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5 posted 2009-02-20 09:49 PM

Yes jim, You are exactley right. Just being lazy. By the way I'm terrible at spelling.
Thank God for spell check. lol

BTW I don't worry myself over such things as credibility. I'm just a turtle

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