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Critical Analysis #2
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free soul
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since 2009-01-09
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between the sky and earth
0 posted 2009-01-12 02:28 AM


HOW DID DARKNESS SORROUND ME,
WHEN MY LIGH WAS AROUND ME,
HOW DID HEAVEN FADE AWAY,
WHEN MY TEARS DID ALLWAYS PRAY.
BY:
PARVEENA ASLAM.
© Copyright 2009 parveen aslam - All Rights Reserved
oceanvu2
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since 2007-02-24
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1 posted 2009-01-13 11:38 PM

Hi -- There is one major reason not to post such a poem here.  If you can't be bothered to spell correctly or uses spell check, few will be bothered to read your work.

Jimbeaux
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