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Critical Analysis #2

Love

Bahigano
Junior Member

since 2008-05-13

Posts 31
Nebraska

0 posted 2008-05-14 11:50 AM

Loving you is an easy task

i know that our love will last

because our love is strong and deep

i wonder what would happen

if you didn't have

ME!

Bahigano
Junior Member

since 2008-05-13

Posts 31
Nebraska

1 posted 2008-05-14 11:51 AM

Hi every one i am new to pip talk. this isn't one of my best sorry bout that but i don't have my lil poetry book. Hope you like .
always
lea

Brad
Member Ascendant

since 1999-08-20

Posts 5705
Jejudo, South Korea

2 posted 2008-05-14 04:58 PM

I wonder if the title is appropriate.

Bahigano
Junior Member

since 2008-05-13

Posts 31
Nebraska

3 posted 2008-05-15 02:02 PM

Probably not but i didn't know what else to call it. my friend and i were just hanging out one day just making up poems for no reason and we kinda like the ring this poem has.
love
lea

oceanvu2
Senior Member

since 2007-02-24

Posts 1066
Santa Monica, California, USA

4 posted 2008-05-15 02:55 PM

Hi Bah! Nothing wrong with sitting around making up poems, but CA might not be the place to post them. You will reach, and meet more people by posting in the Open or Teen forums.

Best, Jimbeaux

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