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TJDoat
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since 2002-09-29
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0 posted 2008-02-01 09:28 AM



Where angels dare to fall,
into chaotic constructions,
as could only be forged by hands,
far too human,
too irrational,
for lending wisdom to life.

Their desires fleeting,
carelessly care free,
a spark of light,
flash!
and then gone,
always into eternity.....

Where angels dare to fall,
and wander here and there,
I wonder what they see,
as they perceive,
the futile dieng of our flares.


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Here's an audio copy of the same poem:Where Angels Dare To Fall(mp3 180k)

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All thoughts please,
-Jason Weiesnbach


© Copyright 2008 Jason Weiesnbach - All Rights Reserved
TomMark
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since 2007-07-27
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1 posted 2008-02-01 01:18 PM


As Biblical meaning,
If it is a true story, then it is the free will and Because they produced many heroic off-springs, then it must be the love. ( I view hero as protecting the weak ones.)

Futile---- we are sinners but not unworthy to God. Otherwise, why Jesus instead flood again?

About the poem. I like it and I think the middle stanza should be the ending one.

My thought.

  

TJDoat
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2 posted 2008-02-05 12:55 PM


I might be opening a big can of biblical debate, but if ones adds the book of Enoch to the previous 4 verses then whole thing becomes very clear. The angels breed with humans, teach their offspring science/magic, add their genetic code to our own, and seriously anger God.
Also in the book of Enoch, he was taken into what can only be described as a spaceship, and explained many things, including the knowledge of "the pillars" that hold the moon and clouds in place.  We call this force "gravity, but we DO NOT know how it works (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Gravity). The most workable theory of gravity the "String Theory" requires more dimensions than the 4 we are currently aware of(height, width, depth, time)...........

Just like all of physics depends on a correct mathematical description of gravity. I feel, all of the bible depends on a correct interpetation of of the verses of Gensis 6:1-4.......

Science is not anti-bible, science is the understanding of the creation we find ourselves in. The book of proverbs is full of quotes glorifying the virtues of knowledge.

This poem is a simplified outline of my basic thoughts of what happened then, and the perceptions of a being existing outside of time, with the vast knowledge of all things as natural as instinct in their minds, as they see us and our misguided first few steps, momnetarily lifting us up to an elevated plain, only to be forever chastised by God, for interferring.


dwgpoet
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since 2007-03-05
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3 posted 2008-02-06 02:59 AM



Genisis 6 answered in verse 5


1) SAMs' book of Enoch: Babel
2) Angels' tower of Babel:

3) Constructions from half-breeds built:
4) Kingdoms' pyramid schemes built:

5) Tempt Seed with all these Kingdoms;
6) SEED breaks and consumes Kingdoms!

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7) Angels gravitated down;
8) Angels war; one third cast down;

9) Nephilim flood losers drowned;
10) Earth swallowed flood; seed not drowned!

11) Big can of worms nevr die;
12) opened the pit; now they die!

13) Hell faces death, once, no more;
14) seed shine in son; death no more!

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1) Genisis 11:9
2) Revelation 18:1-5

3) Genisis 6:1-5
4) Jeremiah 23:25-40

5) Matthew 4:7-11
6) Daniel 2:44

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7) Jude 6
8) Revelation 8:12 ; 12:9-12

9) Mark 5:13
10) Exodus 15:12 ; Revelation 12:15-17

11) Isaiah 66:24 ; Acts 12:23
12) Revelation 9:1-4

13) Revelation 20:13-15
14) Matthew 13:43 ; Revelation 21:1-4

copyright dwgpoet 2007

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