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0 posted 2006-08-09 08:47 PM


I think I love you
But I can't say
Though you make my problems go away
You still me, soft,
With just one glance
And put me in
A sort of trance

And though you're with my friend
I want your love to end
So our story can
At last begin

I'm livin on
A fantasy
I'm livin on
My wildest dreams
As you're stuck
In reality

Come join me in
My fantasy
And we'll dream the day away
Come join me in my fantasy
I've got something to say

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