Walls for God-rewrite- needs new title

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Walls for God-rewrite- needs new title

pen&paper
Senior Member

since 2006-06-06

Posts 513

0 posted 2006-08-08 02:36 PM

I build up walls
Only God can climb
And yet to me
Others, themselves bind
I know not what to do
When it comes to myself
Only Everybody else
I know what to say
I know what to do
Not to me
But to you
If I could be
Myself to me
as I am to you
Then through those walls, you see,
There is a hope of breaking through

beautyincalvary
Member

since 2006-07-13

Posts 98

1 posted 2006-08-11 05:38 PM

Hm, I don't really get the rhyming here. Not so "get", but "feel", really.

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