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I Dream |
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Wicced_Witch Member
since 2000-02-06
Posts 110Clarksville, TN, USA |
Images in slow-motion, a revolving picture show. I dream. Memories will invade, with flashes of the unreal. I dream. Hidden meanings in the mind? Subconscious talking in code? I dream. Insight to another plane? Reflections of how I feel? I dream. A view in Technicolor, in a world of black, white, grays. I dream. Angels, demons, friends and foes, Things not always what they seem. I dream. The wonders, awes, and questions, of future, present and past. I dream. I live, I love, I aspire, I fear, I hope, I dream. I dream. |
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Skippyrick Member
since 2006-05-16
Posts 150Rohnert Park |
hi: I like this one. One thougt though do you need all the I dreams? I think the flow would be better if you took out a the least half of them. Rick |
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Always Lisa Member
since 2003-06-08
Posts 133 |
Just a thought... Images in slow-motion, a revolving picture show. I dream Memories will invade with flashes of the unreal. Hidden meanings in the mind? Subconscious talking in code? I dream Insight to another plane? Reflections of how I feel? A view in Technicolor, in a world of black, white, grays. I dream Angels, demons, friends and foes, Things not always what they seem. The wonders, awes, and questions of future, present and past. I dream. I live, I love, I aspire, I fear, I hope, I dream. I dream. Lastly, the questioning in this seemed to get away from you. Interesting chant though Lisa |
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