Critical Analysis #2 |
Voices From The Graveyard |
gelato Member
since 2005-10-27
Posts 63TN,USA |
Voices From The Graveyard My whole life through I heard them clear It was the voices of ones once near They told me "I swear! You can do no right!" It was quite a slight. I fought, not them. Their voices I would slight If I were to condemn. I knew they must be right By inferring I'm not quite bright. This was my lot in life. I was introduced and led; Face to face with my anger. I was informed that it held danger. I had held it in too long, From too much listening to the wrong Voices from the graveyard. The first year of the rest of my life There was plenty of strife. As I remembered those pent up stings They had planned to heal my wings. But I was ignorant of the pain it brings. After two years I thought I had won, But my smile became one of dread. After those years of my writing fun, My fingers turned into lead. And the journals I wrote as a giver I owed. Made me glad to think I'd been led. After three years I found the source, you see You just assert and turn the key. But I can't see words they block most things, All the sadness it stills not sings. Emotion is a river that just lives underground With sweet replies above. So take your cares To the cliffs that are there, And bid them all adieu. Sent on their way Upon the breakers today, But to your chagrin They return again. "Relationships are the one tangible connection we have with God" - Purpose Driven Life |
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ManOfWolves28 Member
since 2005-12-21
Posts 83 |
Odd as it sounds this reminds me of that T.V. show on CBS called Ghost Whisperer. Aside from that I enjoyed reading this. ...If you choose not to decide you still have made a choice. |
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gelato Member
since 2005-10-27
Posts 63TN,USA |
Thanks. You must not have liked it, then? Sounds like something I would enjoy...did you say that it was an old one? "Relationships are the one tangible connection we have with God" - Purpose Driven Life |
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playing.with.crayons Member
since 2006-01-02
Posts 362Neverland |
good poem except, alas: "The first year of the rest of my life There was plenty of strife" can you think of nothing else to replace that word? Yes Ghost Whisperer is on now in Oz. Quite a hit actually. |
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gelato Member
since 2005-10-27
Posts 63TN,USA |
Oz? and thanks. "Relationships are the one tangible connection we have with God" - Purpose Driven Life |
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playing.with.crayons Member
since 2006-01-02
Posts 362Neverland |
yeah its on in Australia. The one with Jennifer Love Hewitt? made it into primetime oddly enough. farewell the ash-tray girl |
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Free_Spirit07 Member
since 2006-01-29
Posts 222The middle of my mind! |
I like! x0x0 Free_Spirit07 fear and tears....STOP rounda bout here! |
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gelato Member
since 2005-10-27
Posts 63TN,USA |
"Relationships are the one tangible connection we have with God" - Purpose Driven Life |
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