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WhiteRose
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since 2002-07-23
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somebody's dungeon

0 posted 2002-07-24 09:00 PM



No sound but the noise in my head.
The dancing of thoughts,
my mind having fun.
Pictures or old paintings
lost time in loving,
lazy hours in the sun.
No disturbance of thinking
into this world of images,
these shapes that have meaning.
Just rest in the din,
sleep in the cacophony
all contradictions are fleeing.
Tranquility of thought
a coming together of experiences
into a woven piece.
A treasure weaved delicately
with threads of memory
into a masterpiece.

Ride the wave of trivia
that make up your mind,
the highway of thought process.
Something may be missing
turn on your headlights
then look, and assess.

This journey is for those
who know what lies
just beyond the detour.

WhiteRose


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