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WhiteRose
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since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon
0 posted 2002-07-23 11:33 PM


No sound
just touch
a caress
a soft
gentle brush
across the skin
shivers
not of cold
of heat ignite
when touched
in love
so featherlight.
Silent love
no crying
no tears
sharing
and caring
throughout the years.
Silent love
unspoken dreams
together
our hearts
make them real.

WhiteRose
© Copyright 2002 Anne Thompson - All Rights Reserved
SimplyGold
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since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453
1 posted 2002-07-24 12:29 PM

Nice meter. Well written, enjoyed very much.
I enoy poems that are not to long. Yours was just right. Long enough to keep interest and yet tell the story.
SimplyGold
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since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453
2 posted 2002-07-24 12:33 PM

I just noticed that you are a new member. Keep writing and welcome. I have just recently been welcomed to this wonderful site. I think you will really like it. Great group of readers.
Permiabilities
Junior Member
since 2002-07-05
Posts 27
3 posted 2002-07-24 04:36 AM

welcome whiterose. very nice poem, i must say i like "No sound/ just touch/ a caress/ a soft/ gentle brush" great begining to a nice poem. thank you for the write, and i hope to see you around this board!
Not A Poet
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since 1999-11-03
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Oklahoma, USA
4 posted 2002-07-24 09:33 AM

Hi Rose,

Just wanted to add my welcome to those above. Hope you enjoy it here.

Check your email.

Pete
Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
5 posted 2002-07-24 11:33 AM


Welcome to Passions, White Rose.  I'm going to enjoy reading your work!

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
The Napkin Writer
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since 2002-06-28
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6 posted 2002-07-24 02:09 PM

Welcome, WhiteRose

Nice read, very soft and tempting!
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