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Seth
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since 2003-04-13
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Arizona

0 posted 2004-09-23 04:34 AM



Last thing I remember is feeling nothing at all, saying something clever and placing a call

to the biggest yellow sign I could find clearly marking my delusion at end.

Perhaps I shall sell tickets, perhaps I shall invite friends.

Or maybe I'll find a way to make lots of cash. Open a flea market and sell other peoples trash…

I could move to Arizona where its too hot to wear jeans, get clean and sober, lose the woman of my dreams.

Last night she turned off her phone so we wouldn’t speak, though God I’ve waited so long to find someone to reach

is this the lesson I'll learn to hate? what good is remembering your wedding if your already late?

can you tell me for certain after all we’ve been through that you don’t hate me, like i do

seth


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