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NIK New Member
since 2004-05-07
Posts 3 |
On a dreary Sunday morning She rode the bus downtown Climbed the stairs to the 16th floor And took the short way down He read the news next morning The headlines blared the tale Sighed with relief at no sign of his name And started reading his mail Alone in his cheap motel room The husband and his bottle of rye Heard the report on the evening news And quietly started to cry There wasn't much of an inquest For a woman with nothing to hide None knew the tears, the pain and the shame For the child she carried inside. |
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rainingwithsun Junior Member
since 2004-05-06
Posts 19Toledo, Ohio USA |
Hi Nik! I had to read this a couple of times before realizing its meaning but found it rather good. A sad tale indeed! |
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wings of the moon Member
since 2003-03-27
Posts 323Pink bubblegum land |
the rhymes weren't over imposing, enjoyed the simplicty of the piece... |
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Destinys_Fallen_Angel Member
since 2004-05-06
Posts 75Boise Idaho |
i enjoyed it and its very good how you got such a powerful message into such a short poem...i'd love to read more of your work Yahoo messenger: destinys_Falen_Angel |
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