Critical Analysis #2 |
sweet memory |
MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
Sweet was the bliss, of his tender kiss. Warm was the touch, that I miss so much. And the stars above, would glow of love. As he held me tight, throughout the night. Our love being a heavenly thing, made angels sing. Though now he's gone, my life goes on. But no more do I hear, so sot and clear. Angels above above, singing of love. And the stars grow dim, when I think of him. For the dark is the part, of a broken heart. Though he's not here, to hold me near. I'l bless the time, that he was mine. And hold to me, his sweet memory. this is dedicated to my first husband skip. died 4-2-76 |
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Not A Poet Member Elite
since 1999-11-03
Posts 3885Oklahoma, USA |
So sorry to hear of your loss. It is really impossible to try to critique a poem written for such an emotional event. Well, for me anyway. |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Heartfelt, warm and sincere. Also, I can not critique this one. Grover. |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
Tender remembrances and sadness lingering with them. I feel the special sentiment in this. hugs, Karen |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
thanks for reading. was second poem i think i posted when i started to share my thoughts and let my heart speak . this year is 30 years since that death stole a father from his son. strange you brought it up. thanks from a heart who forever keeps his love alive. My spirit will rise above the sea~ There will be no drowning of my soul or me~ |
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MsSouthernOrchid Member
since 2003-07-12
Posts 192 |
Sad and touching. It reminded me when I lost my 1st husband in Vietnam. I wrote a poem for him also and posted it here last year I believe it was. It was called Going Home, A Soldier's Final Rest. You might enjoy reading it. I can relate because I understand that even though we go on with our lives, a part of the heart forever lingers back in time with our lost loved ones. Bless you. |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
thank you. i shall look forword to reading the one you wrote. i too know many who died, and who are lost souls that died inside from that war. My spirit will rise |
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