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What Love Is To Me |
Eyes New Member
since 2000-04-25
Posts 6Edmonton Alberta Cannada |
What Love is to me Love is saying I love you, and meaning it with every thing that is inside of you. Love is letting go of your mask that you hide behind. Love is unconditional with no strings attached. Love is soft and kind, but can be tough at times. Love is given with open arms and a open heart. Love is peace and harmony. Love should not hurt, but at times it will. Love is not perfect in any way. Love comes in many forms. Love is being able to, love ones self first. Love is being abel to let others, love you for who you are. Love is for all the right reasons. That is what LOVE is to me. By Eyes [This message has been edited by Eyes (edited 04-28-2000).] |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
An honest poem and very well written. I like your opinion on what love truly is. If only everyone, men and women felt the same way. Beautiful! Take care, Melissa Honeybee |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
This is beautiful and heartfelt....I think your idea of love is rather lovely!! Love and hugs, Lizzie "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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PrincessPoet Member
since 2000-04-15
Posts 133Long Beach, Calif. |
LOVE you captured it well, one thing though, fourth line from the bottom you put abel just in case you didn't notice the misprint for "able" Your failures in life come from not realizing your nearness to success when you give up. -Yoruba Proverb Poetry & Friendship, PrincessPoet |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
That's what love means to me, too! Denise |
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Eyes New Member
since 2000-04-25
Posts 6Edmonton Alberta Cannada |
I hope thowes of you who have had a chance to read my poems have enjoyed them because I enjoy wrighting it thankes for the suport YOURS TRULY Eyes |
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blackhalo Member
since 2000-02-15
Posts 467Denver, CO |
Truly beautiful. Sorry about the whole, 2 replies thing. [This message has been edited by Alicia Renzelman (edited 05-02-2000).] |
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blackhalo Member
since 2000-02-15
Posts 467Denver, CO |
I am SOOO glad this wasn't the ever so popular: What love is to me Is a conversation When a guy puts his foundation Between a girl's seperation Do you dig the conversation Or do you need a demonstration Beautiful poem, expresses my thoughts in ways I didn't know anyone else understood. Thank you Life defines no more than what it is you ask for. April 20, 2000 Alicia A. Renzelman |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
^_^ aah, nice poem.. I always find it is such a hard thing to write about; 'love'.. seems particularly useful words are elusive, or don't exist.. ^_^ Well done.. sweet thoughts.. One thing.. yeah, u spelt "able" right, and on line 11, u have written "a open heart" probably typo.. but should be "an open.." ^_^ Lynne |
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Broken_Winged_Angel Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 994Small Town, Somewhere |
Very nice.. I like it. To oppose you is to deny the heart of friendship... To join you is to deny the heart of humanity. I am the earth... the fire... you are the sea and wind. Should we together be god? Or apart be nemesis... |
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