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Tramp Poet Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 754Could Be Anywhere... 
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a toy lays upon the step left in haste....can't reach it.... Voices loud again screen slams hard under porch hiding. It's cool, dusty a quiet place with the spiders. The world calm the voices small here; under, forgotten. Far in back dusty beer bottles sharp, broken, blood. It's ok, twilight someone will notice call the name. No one comes except the cold jeans dirty, trouble. Never come out can't make me I'll cut them. Like this again it's darker now won't they call? Haven't they noticed will they ever maybe a scream. Like they do yell, stomp, bleed all over the place. A toy lays upon the step left in haste.... can't reach it.... ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Don't remember if i have shared this before...i was going to put it in my new e-portfolio at http://tramppoet.homepage.com...but decided it was abit too dark... btw- in answer to query, my sister hounded me into this web site and i came kicking, screaming and pouting... bleeding, even and then it became this Star Trek Scottie kinda thang with the odd signature and all...well anyway enough of this drivel bleeding... "Tis ink coming from his arm, Captain!" |
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PhaerieChild Senior Member
since 1999-08-30
Posts 1787Aloha, Oregon |
Dear sweet brother...you may have come here kicking, screaming, pouting, and yes, perhaps even bleeding(rolls eyes) but you are here now and you have posted some great poetry. Now aren't ya glad ya did? huhh? I love to read your work anyway and this is the best place for it. btw...love your poem and your new site!! Wish I woulda thunk 'o' it first. LOL Love you lots and miss you....Sis Poetry~ Words falling on paper, painting a dream. Shawna R. Holder Boise, Idaho |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Yes, I remember reading this before. Excellent writing, Bleeding! Denise |
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childomine Senior Member
since 2000-01-25
Posts 818st. petersburg, FL |
Excellent piece of work Bleed. Deeply haunting. |
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