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Thoughts of You (you asked for one)

hoppy
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since 2000-01-27

Posts 271

0 posted 2000-04-25 12:28 PM

Here is, in my opinion, one of my better writtings. So i won't ramble i'll just let you read

Thoughts of You

Thoughts run through my head
I feel so lost, almost dead
I can't control them they're all around
They're takin' over my mind and no comfort can be found
I don't know why they invade like they do
I only know they start with you
Why do they come ony at night
When I lie awake and sit so quiet
They rade my mind each time i think
Afraid to loose them i refuse blink
But in the morning I will wake anew
But I will have lost my thoughts of you
---Written by:Hoppy

11-20-99

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ESP
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since 2000-01-25

Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....

1 posted 2000-04-25 03:26 AM

Lovely poem!!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie

"Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."

John the cat
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since 2000-03-23

Posts 357
England

2 posted 2000-04-25 02:54 PM

Sweet Hoppy. Very sweet.

May your roof never fall in and those beneath it never fall out.

Irish proverb.

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