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Wikket Member
since 2000-01-29
Posts 340Santa Clara, CA USA 
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Here I am again Alone and drifting away Watching the sunset Saying 'Goodbye' to day Where is here? I have drifted very long My eyes have depth The World sings a tired song No, I am not ending me I am here for someone The search for whom Is quite overdone Perhaps it is life itself I search for day by day Hoping I find the secret Through a cloud of shaded grey It is hard to be uplifting When all I feel is drained I feel sometimes I'm different Like a good person, only stained I try and make a difference My life is full of gifts But I can't change the filter I mirror it with rifts One day I'll have forgotten The lonely time I'm in Right now it's all I know I'll embrace it as my kin by, Jamie Hartman 2000 --Yeah, it's been a while. You know me, busy busy busy. But not busy enough I guess, I still think too much (as you can see). Hope you all are doing well and I'll try to stay here more often. Happy Birthday Gene!  |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
very beautiful, Wikket.. fabulous words.. moving.. sad..well, if this is what u do when u r not busy, I don't think i'd mind it, if u were never busy!  Lynne |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Lovely words....be busy less often! Love and hugs, Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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Swåmp¤Faerÿie Member
since 2000-03-29
Posts 358Illinois |
i always love to read your poems!! You're one of my favorites =] swampfaeryie And there she weaves by night and day, a magic web of colours gay.~Tennyson |
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Gene Senior Member
since 2000-01-23
Posts 935Colorado, USA |
Lovely one, Jamie. Thanks for the Birthday wish. Don't stay away so long. ~Gene |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Wonderful poem, Jamie! Welcome back! Denise |
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Wikket Member
since 2000-01-29
Posts 340Santa Clara, CA USA |
Thank you Yu Lan, ESP, swampfaeryie, Gene, and Denise...your comments are wonderful. By the way swampfaeryie, we also share a favorite poem... "... And at the closing of the Day, She loosed the chain and down she lay, The broad stream bore her far away, The Lady of Shalott..." --Alfred Lord Tennyson |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
a nice sad one about loneliness... |
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