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Gene Senior Member
since 2000-01-23
Posts 935Colorado, USA |
I have a theory to which I adhere: When once every million years, The planets and stars come together in harmony To create a most magnificent symphony, Called, ‘The Music of The Spheres.’ This year, is such a year. When all things, and all manner of thought Are brought into synchronous motion, And must be done every so oft’, To keep the universe from explosion. ______ ~Gene It often comes to me at night, When lights are dim, and thoughts are bright, As I ponder what to write, Take pen in hand, and with it make My words appear as no mistake. Guided by a force unknown, I create a new and wondrous poem. ~Gene~ |
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Jonas Senior Member
since 2000-03-03
Posts 796Oregon |
I love this Gene. The vision of the planets and stars coming together and playing their celestial music is breathtaking! "A poet is someone who is astonished by everything." - anonymous |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautiful music, Gene! Denise |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
I love this poem Gene. I think I'll spend some time there in my dreams.  |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Wonderful!!! And, as it's the 24th, Happy Birthday! Love and hugs, Lizzie "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
beautiful, gene.. I hope that the next time is within my lifetime!! now that, would be something to see..  very nicely said.. sweet poem..Lynne ps.. Happy Birthday gene..  |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
An interesting theory wrought a magical poem and stirred wondrous visions of the stars. Thank you for the trip Liz |
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Gene Senior Member
since 2000-01-23
Posts 935Colorado, USA |
Gary -- Denise -- Munda -- Liz -- Thanks, glad you liked the music. I have the soundtrack. Lizzie -- Lynne -- Thanks, for the nice reply and B-day wishes. ~Gene |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
Great theory!!! I love it! I had to read this one, gene... the title was very 'fetching'... and your theory will make me think all day about this.... i just love the concept!! Happy birthday, btw... i think i missed it doreen |
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Gene Senior Member
since 2000-01-23
Posts 935Colorado, USA |
Thanks, Doreen. You slipped in there on me. ~Gene |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
I agree with Doreen here - The title caught me - and the poem kept me.. Nice job, my friend..  |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
I can just imagine the whole scenerio and it's magnificent. Walking away after it with a whole new aura of thought. Excellent poem, I love it. |
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wonderous Member
since 2000-02-29
Posts 75 |
hi sorry i have been away for a while. i read this while at work and couldnt reply to it as i didnot have my password. its beautiful. i especially love the title. |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Beautiful harmonic thoughts .. Beautiful work, Gene .... |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
LOL,u_gene,liked this very much...here's a challenge for you:write me a poem about just what kind of music these planets and stars might play?eg,Red Mars might play hot hot music,ice-cold planets sing chilling songs etc will be looking forward to your post! |
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