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i was born in a small town |
the bard New Member
since 2000-04-14
Posts 6Chapel Hill, NC |
Small town America, fruit of the land, I know you better than anyone can, I’ve driven you’re roads and read your signs, Bought your clothes and eaten your food; played the fool While kissing your daughters; I have fished your waters. I have sat down beside the men who run your show, I have sweat in the sun and near froze in the snow, Been scoffed and applauded, Lied to, beat up, and cheated While down and defeated by the times. I held your god in the palm of my hand In the drive thru lane of McDonalds. It was green, and it smelled funny. |
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rich-pa Member
since 2000-02-07
Posts 317New Orleans, Louisiana |
that was awesome! it reminds me of my good friends style very much! keep up the good work because i have thoroughly enjoyed your poetry so far! rich-pa "freedom is just another word for nothing left to lose..." -janis joplin |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
Yep it's a shame those burgers mean so much to so many. A point well written. Jon |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
lol...cool poem with a good point in it. It took me a few seconds to cotton on to what your last three lines, meant! Great job! Love and hugs, Lizzie "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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twinsgd Member
since 2000-02-13
Posts 416Ontario,Canada |
Great poem Bard, enjoyed this If smelly green stuff a problem , let me know , be glad to help. LOL Jack |
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