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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Drinking Challenge This challenge is very hard for me Cos I don’t drink at all. I don’t need to ask "what is Whisky", It’s what makes people walk in to walls. Just kidding, that only happens if you have too much But what would I know about such? Plenty people get drunk And then they’re sunk. Others don’t lose it like that, They got sick of puking on the new car mat. One tequila...two tequila..three tequila...floor, And after that they still want more. I’ve heard the stories of the drunks, Making cars smell like dirty skunks. They kill people on the roads frequently By driving and then thinking subsequently. I know it’s supposed to make you cool... So say many of the kids at school. I know it’s supposed to take away stress, But heck it also makes the world a mess! I also know drinking can be okay, If you stick to one a day. Okay if you want, two is fine... But please stop while you can still walk a straight line! "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
This is awesome, I love it, I was laughing from the first stanza.  The sober can see reality so much better. [This message has been edited by Lost Dreamer (edited 04-17-2000).] |
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twinsgd Member
since 2000-02-13
Posts 416Ontario,Canada |
Oooooh this is really great Lizzie....but I don't remember walking into walls...er...oooh...er..um....maybe that's it....I don't remember...LOL. Wonderful poem with an excellent message...well said. Jack |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Challenge well met, Lizzie! Good advice in this that everyone should heed! Denise |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Great poem Lizzie. Great message too ! |
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blackhalo Member
since 2000-02-15
Posts 467Denver, CO |
Drinking in moderation is always ok. Good message, just don't let it get out of hand! Hope, Alicia A. Renzelman |
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Gene Senior Member
since 2000-01-23
Posts 935Colorado, USA |
Very well-constructed poem. Hey, we serve root beer too, here in the Pub. ~Gene |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
What's root beer, Gene? Can I try some?!?  Love and hugs, Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
We also sell sobering thoughts. You can have as many of these as you like. Nice writing Jon |
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achicade Member
since 2000-04-02
Posts 66Marietta, GA USA |
Great poem!  ) |
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PrincessPoet Member
since 2000-04-15
Posts 133Long Beach, Calif. |
ESP: U left a good message For those who Over do it Keep Writing and, I'll Keep Reading! Your failures in life come from not realizing your nearness to success when you give up. -Yoruba Proverb Poetry & Friendship, PrincessPoet |
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