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Bluebell Wood |
Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
Deep within the bluebell wood Shaded from the midday sun All the world we see is good Here dreams from realities… run We’re undisturbed and free from noise We only hear the babbling brook And now thought with our memory toys With beauty now our breath is took The scene around just overwhelms The sweet scent on the breeze is born We’re carried now to heady realms And sorrow from our mind is torn Through the trees the dappled light Descending now in flicking ray Words are dancing in my sight As dewdrops melt my fears away The crystal stream with thanks reflects The birdsong back up to the clouds The pulse of life my heart detects And silvery webs the snowdrops crowds The scene is reeling through my heart This peaceful and adoring place This wonder to you I now…. impart As through it with my muse I race Jon Mewett [This message has been edited by Jon Mewett (edited 04-17-2000).] |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
nice.. serene poem.. Lynne |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
This is lovely, Jon!! Boy do I wish you would give me a ride to this Bluebell Wood of yours,it sounds absolutely wonderful! Love and hugs, Lizzie "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
Thanx This is a place of my childhood. Held in my minds eye,it doesn't seem the same today. Jon |
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twinsgd Member
since 2000-02-13
Posts 416Ontario,Canada |
Beautiful Jon Whilst reading I was there...idyllic. Childhood places I revisited after many years were surprisingly so very much smaller than I remembered. Jack |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
Yeah Jack that's so true,and time seems to go by quicker too. Jon |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
You took me there,too, Jon! This is lovely! Denise |
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rich-pa Member
since 2000-02-07
Posts 317New Orleans, Louisiana |
absolutely encaptivating....in other words, i dig it, yo. excellent excellent, there's nothing like some good, beautiful, descriptive writing. rich-pa "freedom is just another word for nothing left to lose..." -janis joplin |
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Swåmp¤Faerÿie Member
since 2000-03-29
Posts 358Illinois |
Wow Jon,i love your words so much =] This poem reminds me of a place where the ground is literaly covered with seas of bluebells that stretch out for a good peice,it's beatiful!! Thanks for putting the beauty into words!! swamp faeryie And there she weaves by night and day, a magic web of colours gay.~Tennyson |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
Thanx Rich Pa thanx Swampie your very kind. Jon |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
This is fabulous with its natural imagery, a world away from it all, yet so reachable. Thanks for sharing it here with us. |
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