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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
The Gypsy Violin The compelling violin lures with an irresistible yearn Dance, dance for me I can no longer adjourn ! Ethereal notes float from its strings Caressing like lovers hands Sensual music, Angel’s touch Leading the way to wonderland Embracing with utter delight Craving, beckoning me Tempting my lonely heart Dance, dance on my melody Faster, faster the music escapes Without compassion to body or soul Seducer of lonely hearts Until dancing is my only goal Faces gyrate while I dance on passion Flashes of fire in the corner of my eyes The violin plays like never before Until I become one and loneliness dies With a final cry and a final touch The violin stops, the music ends Leaving behind an emptiness We’ll meet again, my violin friend Munda |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Yes, I'm first to respond to this marvelous poem you wrote, I love it, it's awesome. ![]() |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Gorgeous, Munda ..... I'm still dancing ... "This is where you will win the battle .... in the playhouse of your mind." Maxwell Maltz |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
I love this, Munda!!! I just can't stop dancing! Thank you for sharing this with us, I think it's brilliant! Love and hugs, Lizzie ![]() "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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twinsgd Member
since 2000-02-13
Posts 416Ontario,Canada |
Can feel the crescendo and tempo of the gypsy dance . A fine poem Munda, I liked this. Jack |
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Gene Senior Member
since 2000-01-23
Posts 935Colorado, USA |
Beautiful, Munda. ![]() Ah, yes, the violin is the most romantic instrument of all. It covers every emotion. Did you see "The Red Violin" yet? ~Gene |
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rich-pa Member
since 2000-02-07
Posts 317New Orleans, Louisiana |
i see this as much more than just a love of the violin, it's a love of all music and what it does to people, very well done if i must say so, munda. rich-pa "freedom is just another word for nothing left to lose..." -janis joplin |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very beautiful, Munda! Denise |
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PrincessPoet Member
since 2000-04-15
Posts 133Long Beach, Calif. |
Bestill, My Beating Heart..... I really Like this one Munda. I could almost hear it, Good rhythm ![]() Poetry & Frienship, From: PrincessPoet |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
Music really is the rhythem of life in all it's glory and it's gory detail. I know of nothing else that captures this so well. Your poem did. More power to the bow of your violin Munda. Jon |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Munda, This is Magnificent!! Hypnotic, Melodic and Exotic all rolled into one!!!GRRRRRRR I mean WELL DONE!!! Dennis :^) |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Thank you all for reading an replying. ![]() ![]() |
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