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kaile
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0 posted 2000-04-15 07:36 AM


Time Whizzs By

Seconds wave me adieu,
Yet I wait

© Copyright 2000 heng kaile - All Rights Reserved
childomine
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1 posted 2000-04-15 08:54 AM


I like this Kaile.  Time is a funny thing - it flies when you want it to crawl and crawls when you want it to fly.  

 ...Give me the strength to walk the soft earth, a relative to all that is....
Black Eagle
Oglala Sioux holy man


achicade
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2 posted 2000-04-15 09:28 AM


Time REALLY whizzes by on the computer, doesn't it?!?!?!  I've been sitting here for three hours now.  I wonder who is doing my laundry! Ha!  


 God bless you all. :-)
-debbie-

Munda
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3 posted 2000-04-15 08:48 PM


LOL you're good ! The longest poem with little words !

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Denise
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4 posted 2000-04-15 09:26 PM



Yu Lan
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5 posted 2000-04-15 09:50 PM


hehehe.. this is good.. smiles, kaile, smiles.    
Strosek
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6 posted 2000-04-16 04:08 AM


really clever.

 May the light of day always shine during the darkest of nights.



ESP
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7 posted 2000-04-16 04:13 AM


Very clever, Kaile! I wish time would like slow down while I am in the Pub!! I could stay here for so much longer then!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie



 "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."

Mon Cherie
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8 posted 2001-12-04 02:35 PM


Hey Kaile!! I don't know what to call this, but this is definitely a clever piece of work. I know why this is the longest poem... It's coz you're waiting...   Am I clever or what? haha!  

Yes, waiting for someone makes time CRAWL... So, a short wait seems sooooo much longer...

_,,,^.^,,,_
Florence

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