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jamesjiao Member
since 2000-04-12
Posts 268Backwaters of Avalon 
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In the distance I could see a figure moving Anxiously wanting To approach me In the distance The figure glanced over its shoulder For a brief second To marvel at me In the distance The misty shadow dissolved Into the past Never reappearing In the distance The path petered out Stretching its arms and Returning no more Jõmes |
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jamesjiao Member
since 2000-04-12
Posts 268Backwaters of Avalon |
OH, hi, this poem may seem a little strange at the start. But just a hint, I am the one who 'anxiously wanting to approach' the person. So the 'me' is actually myself. ^_^ Jõmes |
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childomine Senior Member
since 2000-01-25
Posts 818st. petersburg, FL |
Very "deep" jiao. I like this a lot, makes one think. I can really relate to this. ...Give me the strength to walk the soft earth, a relative to all that is.... Black Eagle Oglala Sioux holy man |
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jamesjiao Member
since 2000-04-12
Posts 268Backwaters of Avalon |
OH thak you |
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Broken_Winged_Angel Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 994Small Town, Somewhere |
Beautiful again..  I hope to keep seeing you post in here.MAY THE ROAD RISE TO MEET YOU, MAY THE WIND BE ALWAYS AT YOUR BACK MAY THE SUN SHINE UPON YOUR FACE THE RAINS FALL SOFT UPON YOUR FIELDS AND, UNTIL WE MEET AGAIN, MAY GOD HOLD YOU IN THE PALM OF HIS HAND Irish Blessing |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Great poem, James! Denise |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
hi James.. hehe.. recognise this one.. I see u have altered it.. 's good ^_^ (OH "thak" you??? lol.. )..... Lynne |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Wow...thought provoking poem that! I'm still trying to figure it out!! Love and hugs, Lizzie "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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