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blackhalo Member
since 2000-02-15
Posts 467Denver, CO |
A candle burns At both ends One end bright The other dim My soul is split In two ends One 'me' The other 'for show' 'Me' is a pessimist Scared to step into the world While 'for show' Is boisterous & loud 'For show' is an optimist Cups always full But 'me' is shy Alone & dying Both are real One is true Life is decieving, Who are you? Hope, Alicia A. Renzelman |
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Beverly Member
since 2000-02-19
Posts 123New Mexico |
Nice poem Alicia. Makes me think of my own persona! |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Nice poem, Alicia! Denise |
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Swåmp¤Faerÿie Member
since 2000-03-29
Posts 358Illinois |
so true......i too hide behind a mask,as do any i know. if you're really able to be yourself at all times then you are certainly a priveledged person.....for me,it is a struggle!! swamp And there she weaves by night and day, a magic web of colours gay.~Tennyson |
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Broken_Winged_Angel Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 994Small Town, Somewhere |
I'd be one of the first to step up and say I may very well be both.. Very good poem.... MAY THE ROAD RISE TO MEET YOU, MAY THE WIND BE ALWAYS AT YOUR BACK MAY THE SUN SHINE UPON YOUR FACE THE RAINS FALL SOFT UPON YOUR FIELDS AND, UNTIL WE MEET AGAIN, MAY GOD HOLD YOU IN THE PALM OF HIS HAND Irish Blessing |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
I always get decieved you see By the clown that is inside of me. Nice one Jon |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Yeah, that's me...sometimes myself and sometimes not. That's life I guess. Really nice poem, I like it a whole lot cuz I can relate to it. Love and hugs, Lizzie "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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JC Junior Member
since 2000-04-10
Posts 32Pennsylvania |
Very deep thought! Wonderful poem!! |
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