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Esmeralda Ponsonby Member
since 2000-04-02
Posts 138 |
Love I'm riding on within your moon beam of love it lights my way giving strength from above only in your darkest hour could you throw me out to thee darkness for me to know thy distance of love reflecting thee star is reached within arms being circular. Now distance elapse yet I feel close as your thoughts and mind engross mine every riding hour without you. Upon mine return I shall give clue thine desire overwhelms thy lips while unto ye mine soul unzips Thine journey forced reflection of mine own minds detection front and center all together mine thoughts all a feather. Sent mind soaring highest doubt tumbles down crest thine anger held hostage whilst stood thine ledge. Love's battle our desire ways to douse thy fire burning out of control devouring thine soul. Carry thou freedom from thy kingdom hold thy closely enduring dearly till thee forever deathly sever thy love boil never spoil engaging enraging lovingly for me for ye love [This message has been edited by Esmeralda Ponsonby (edited 04-12-2000).] |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
This is lovely!!! So so beautiful.... Love and hugs, Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very creative and romantic, Esmeralda! Denise |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Esmeralda, This graphically pleasing, Delightful reading, words express, tenderness, love, Is ! FANTASTIC! Dennis :^) |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
Could this be the tip of the arrow from Cupids Bow?. I Love It. Jon |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Like the presentation here, Esmeralda This piece is Beautiful ..... |
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Broken_Winged_Angel Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 994Small Town, Somewhere |
Tis very wonderful indeed! Picture wise, word wise, reading wise.. I enjoyed it all the way.. |
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Esmeralda Ponsonby Member
since 2000-04-02
Posts 138 |
Lizzie: Thank you very much Denise: Thanks Dennis: Thank you very much, your creativity was very nice also. Jon: Thank you, I guess it could be, it's just the way this one worked itself out, but I like your idea. Pepper: thank you most kindly. BWA: Thank You. |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
well, that is a new way to write a poem, huh?! ^_^ I like it, E.P.. good presentation makes for good reading.. ^_^ U like to use old fashioned language, eh? ^_^ Ever written a poem where you haven't? hehe, might be quite a challenge, huh? I dare you.. try it.. I issue you a challenge.. write a poem, using no thees, thous, arts, etc.. (hehe)  nice poetry, Esmeralda.. you write beautifully.Lynne |
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jamesjiao Member
since 2000-04-12
Posts 268Backwaters of Avalon |
I think this poem's been posted earlier last week. But it deserves more applausible comments, since it's just such a great, as well as uniquely creative, poem. As Yu Lan has mentioned, you seem to have adpoted old English. It's a great taste, and every word is well used. Keep it up, mate!! Sorrow is the starting point of happiness. Without sorrow, a man can never realize the true meaning of happiness. Jõmes |
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Esmeralda Ponsonby Member
since 2000-04-02
Posts 138 |
Lynn: Thanks for reading and responding with your beautiful compliments. As for your challenge I write all the time without old english, you must have missed when I told everyone who I am. Check out Lost Dreamer and you'll see your challenge met james: Thank you very much your applause reaches my heart and makes it feel happy, glad you enjoyed |
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Gene Senior Member
since 2000-01-23
Posts 935Colorado, USA |
I don't know how I missed this one. This is very creative. Well-done, Esmeralda. --- Jon, I think it's a torch or maybe an ice cream cone, with Love as the ice cream (flavor). ~Gene |
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PrincessPoet Member
since 2000-04-15
Posts 133Long Beach, Calif. |
Esmeralda Hello: < !signature-->Creative Presentation, Beautiful Work of Poetry Love Is,... A very splendid thing Your failures in life come from not realizing your nearness to success when you give up. -Yoruba Proverb Poetry & Friendship, PrincessPoet [This message has been edited by PrincessPoet (edited 04-25-2000).] |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
Ahh, u r right, I must have missed it Esmeralda. ^_^ Well, I am not quite sure where u mean for me to look.. Lost Dreamer?? well, I would love to read your other work.. I am not sure where to find it though.. can u explain please? Well, I think that's great, that u can write using both.. so great that such beautiful words can be remembered.. and so beautifully used.. Lynne |
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Esmeralda Ponsonby Member
since 2000-04-02
Posts 138 |
Gene: Thank you very much, and I like the ice cream cone idea Princess Poet: Thanks for reading glad you enjoyed. Lynne: Esmeralda Ponsonby and Lost Dreamer are the same person writing just different styles, I did do one for your challenge by Esmeralda called, The Hand That Cradles. Thanks for enjoying her writing. |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
I see you did it again Esmeralda. Wonderful poem !  |
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