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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. 
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****************************** Gusting April wind Laps up the water puddle Left from springtime rain ****************************** Crabgrass running free Laughing at my feeble ploys From my yard to purge ****************************** Puffy clouds float by Summon imagination The Angels playground? ****************************** Poetry is the expression of thoughts which awake the higher and nobler emotions, or their opposites, with words arranged to some accepted convention.........or maybe not! Dennis :^) |
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Broken_Winged_Angel Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 994Small Town, Somewhere |
Few words, and gigantic thoughts. Congratulations on a job well done. MAY THE ROAD RISE TO MEET YOU, MAY THE WIND BE ALWAYS AT YOUR BACK MAY THE SUN SHINE UPON YOUR FACE THE RAINS FALL SOFT UPON YOUR FIELDS AND, UNTIL WE MEET AGAIN, MAY GOD HOLD YOU IN THE PALM OF HIS HAND Irish Blessing |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
There It was Gone Jon Nice Work |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
very nice.  |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
These are great, Dennis! Denise |
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Gene Senior Member
since 2000-01-23
Posts 935Colorado, USA |
Three great haiku, Dennis. The fourth one is kinda weird, though.  ~Gene |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
I love them Dennis ! I do !  |
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deleeme Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766NEW ENGLAND, USA |
Dennis, I admire your willingness to grow in your abilities though applying yourself to new things. I am not quite so brave, but like you I do strive for freshness and variety. You're doing great Brother!! Keep it up! Love Ya, David |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
Fair point Gene. An over indulgence in the Japanese lust for TINY things. Jon |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Dennis~ Another nice grouping of Haiku. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Yet another great set of haiku, Dennis!! You show great strength in this area of poetry and many others too! Love and hugs, Lizzie "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Wonderful !!!! |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
i read and i liked and i just wonder where was i when these haiku were posted... i dont know why but the first haiku really appeals to me... |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
These were great!!! WOW!!!!!!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
Dennis, there are no superlatives left for your haiku. They are always magnificent! So glad Kaile hunted these up for us! Nice to think of spring things right now, too! To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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