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Esmeralda Ponsonby Member
since 2000-04-02
Posts 138 |
Thy Curse And Thy Passion Oceans depth curl gently thine waves save thine existence from thee caves thine undertowed wrath frightfully vain take honor from on high to not abstain. Searched thee earth for thine own suitor ye hath not eyed thee majesty of pewter her grace n'er opens thine doors of gold whilst locked inside her souls grown cold. Hollowed gold thy doors cursed by dare destiny of old myth could n'er thou share thy pewter within thou halls of such clutter descend those who are permitted to shutter. Thy prize of beauty lying in thy castle dark shall release thy curse only if a man embark to win thy graces fair by enticing her desires in gentle words of truth strung upon sapphires. Not a man yet hath found thy words to please as yet thy beautiful lady lies waiting to seize thy curse and thy passion driven behind doors from thy men who vision women as only hores. [This message has been edited by Lost Dreamer (edited 04-08-2000).] |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautiful poem, Esmeralda. This must be a great book you have been reading!  Denise |
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twinsgd Member
since 2000-02-13
Posts 416Ontario,Canada |
Wouldst that I couldst assuage thy desires But I hast no words to string on saphires. I really like this one Esmeralda. Jack |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
This was excellent, Esmeralda. "Those permitted to shutter" - that is quite a powerful line. Speaks volumes to one like me. michael |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Beautiful, Esmarelda!! I love it! Love and hugs, Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is a rainbow of delight." |
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Esmeralda Ponsonby Member
since 2000-04-02
Posts 138 |
Denise, I have finished the book and it was fabulous, this was not in it, just came to me in pieces and formed itself. Thank you for reading and enjoying. Jack, thanks, I'm sure the words would have to be just so right to bring her out from this castle if that be at all possible after so long. Michael, Thank you, glad you enjoyed. interesting how different lines in poems can hit a chord in people. Lizzie, thanks, bunches glad you enjoy. |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Oh dear ! And now you're making me read this book ! Great poem !  |
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