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gumpno
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since 2000-03-20

Posts 3

0 posted 2000-04-07 03:31 PM

THIS IS MY POEM WHICH I WROTE TO MY LOVLY JENNY
(my first language is german so im not very good)

U

I think of u day and night,
when it is dark and when it is light,
there is no one who excites me more,
and no one i want to look for,
u are my girl, u are forever mine,
when it rains and when it shines,
i want to hold u next to me,
that is where i want u to be.

Sasikat
Member

since 2000-02-02

Posts 290
St. Petersburg, FL

1 posted 2000-04-07 03:35 PM

gumpno,

Sounds like you love your Jenny very much. You wrote this very well, couldn't tell that German is your primary language. Well done.

Sheila

...the earth and myself are of one mind. The measure of the land and the measure of our bodies are the same........... Joseph, Nez Perce Chief

John the cat
Member

since 2000-03-23

Posts 357
England

2 posted 2000-04-07 03:35 PM

Your lovely Jenny is a lucky girl and your English is better than mine and I am English

Well done.

May your roof never fall in and those beneath it never fall out.

Irish proverb.

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

3 posted 2000-04-07 06:29 PM

Welcome to Passions, Gumpno! This is a beautiful poem! Please check your email for a special welcome!

P.S. Your English is wonderful, wish my German were that good! I had two years of it in High School and I only remember one Christmas poem.

Munda
Member Elite

since 1999-10-08

Posts 3544
The Hague, The Netherlands

4 posted 2000-04-07 06:55 PM

What a wonderful poem to your Jenny. Welcome to the Pub.

Jenni6478
Junior Member

since 2000-03-12

Posts 11

5 posted 2000-04-07 07:16 PM

Babe, you are the love of my life....I want to be with you always and forever...you are the sunshine when it is raining....you are the warm, comforting hands soothing me when i am cold....you are my everything and i long for the day we will be together again...i love u, christian

love always,
your jenny

tom
Member

since 2000-01-26

Posts 90
s/w penna u.s.a.

6 posted 2000-04-07 10:07 PM

gumpno

Good poem,love has no specific language.
Was this originally in german, if so please
translate

tom

childomine
Senior Member

since 2000-01-25

Posts 818
st. petersburg, FL

7 posted 2000-04-08 08:21 AM

You express your love for Jenny very well. It's obvious from your words that she holds the key to your heart.

...Give me the strength to walk the soft earth, a relative to all that is....
Black Eagle
Oglala Sioux holy man

ESP
Member Elite

since 2000-01-25

Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....

8 posted 2000-04-09 02:05 PM

This is lovely! Hey, u should post some German poetry in here sometime...I'd love to see it! Your English is very good!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie

Gene
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since 2000-01-23

Posts 935
Colorado, USA

9 posted 2000-04-09 05:48 PM

gumpno,

Welcome to the Pub. Great first post. Your English is fine.

~Gene

Lonely Shadow
Member

since 2000-03-14

Posts 128
Virginia

10 posted 2000-04-09 05:53 PM

This is a wonderful poem gumpno. Welcome to the Pub.

To find love is to know true happiness... to lose love is to lose everything

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