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Virgo Junior Member
since 2000-03-27
Posts 46tx |
In the stars it is written For us forever to be Our love meant for eternity Our love to set us free Although meant for eternity Our lives are not entwined Too many different obstacles Too many lives combined For in our next lifetime We must unfortunately wait To make our love a reality To make our love our fate |
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John the cat Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 357England |
Wow...how I know the feeling behind this. Great words, I feel for you. May your roof never fall in and those beneath it never fall out. Irish proverb. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is so beautifully written, Virgo. Very lovely! Denise |
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StarrGazer Senior Member
since 2000-03-05
Posts 679Texas |
very good job great emotion !!! Mystical being which makes ink flow Surround me in your incandescent glow Fill my brain with thoughts and rhyme As I try to capture but a moment in time ~Shan~ |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
This is a lovely poem....full of emotions that many sadly have felt. Great job!! Love and hugs, Lizzie  |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
Very nice writing.I enjoyed this. Jon |
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Virgo Junior Member
since 2000-03-27
Posts 46tx |
thank you all for your response...this poem expresses how I feel about my current relationship...funny how it never seems to be the right time or place for the perfect love... |
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childomine Senior Member
since 2000-01-25
Posts 818st. petersburg, FL |
Beautiful and full of the promise of another chance. |
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