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songwater Junior Member
since 2000-04-02
Posts 32Marietta,Ga. |
If I should ever loose my legs No longer could stand free Would you hold my hand,would you stand for me? If I should ever loose my eyes No longer could I see Would you hold my hand,would you stand for me? Would you hold my hand,would you stand for me? Would you hold my hand,would you look for me? If I should ever loose my voice No longer could speek free Would you hold my hand,would you stand for me? If I should ever loose my mind No longer could dream free Would you hold my hand,would you stand for me? Would you hold my hand,would you speak for me? Would you hold my hand,would you dream for me? Would you dream of me? ? |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This would make a beautiful song! Denise |
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childomine Senior Member
since 2000-01-25
Posts 818st. petersburg, FL |
This is beautiful Songwater. I absolutely love this. ...Give me the strength to walk the soft earth, a relative to all that is.... Black Eagle Oglala Sioux holy man |
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Jonas Senior Member
since 2000-03-03
Posts 796Oregon |
I love this piece! Very lyrical! "Writing is easy. All you do is stare at a blank sheet of paper until drops of blood form on your forehead." -Gene Fowler |
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just_another_fe Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 483MICHIGAN |
This reminded me of a song to. good job its great  |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Lovely!! Why don't you set it to music?!? Love and hugs, Lizzie  |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
This poem danced in my eyes, and I agree you should make this a song, maybe you already have and it's delighted other's ears with it's beauty. Thanks for sharing it here with us at Passions. |
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songwater Junior Member
since 2000-04-02
Posts 32Marietta,Ga. |
To everyone at Passions.You guessed it, yes my poems are songs I have written.I really appreciate all the positive feed-back. ? |
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Sasikat Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 290St. Petersburg, FL |
Songwater, This is absolutely beautiful. And, if the person's love is true, the answer is yes to all of these questions. Sheila ...the earth and myself are of one mind. The measure of the land and the measure of our bodies are the same........... Joseph, Nez Perce Chief |
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achicade Member
since 2000-04-02
Posts 66Marietta, GA USA |
Yes. |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Yes, this definitely sounds like a song. Well done ! |
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Broken_Winged_Angel Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 994Small Town, Somewhere |
It's wonderful how you make our minds hum along with your words... Beautiful. MAY THE ROAD RISE TO MEET YOU, MAY THE WIND BE ALWAYS AT YOUR BACK MAY THE SUN SHINE UPON YOUR FACE THE RAINS FALL SOFT UPON YOUR FIELDS AND, UNTIL WE MEET AGAIN, MAY GOD HOLD YOU IN THE PALM OF HIS HAND Irish Blessing |
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