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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
I have never been in love before but this is how I think it should be. I’ll know.... I’ll know when my love comes along..... He’ll look into my eyes and see into my heart. He’ll smile a special smile just for me, We will always be together, never apart. His touch will send a surge of electricity through my soul, I will melt into his soft and tender embrace. My lips with his slender fingers he will trace, So in love will we be. The man of my dreams will never betray me, His love for me will be so real. I won’t ever have to worry about being alone, He will promise me that with a kiss as the seal. His kiss will fill my heart and soul with everlasting joy, We will walk beneath the stars all night. With him everything will seem so right. So in love will we be. I have never been in love before, But I’ll know when everlasting love comes along. He will always be able to make me happy, He will fill my heart with a beautiful song. His love will be my life long pleasure, forever and ever, We’ll dance in the moonlight- dance all night. Into my life he will bring dazzling light. So in love will we be. Forever and ever, till death do us part, I’ll love him with every bit of my heart. So in love will we be. |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
ESP. This is a lovely wish I hope he deserves YOU when he comes along. When love beckons you follow him But as his wings enfold you So may he crucify you. If you want to laugh but not all of your laughter Cry but not all of your tears Bid him Farewell |
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twinsgd Member
since 2000-02-13
Posts 416Ontario,Canada |
Beautiful poem Lizzie, and you called it.....that's exactly how it will be. "Into my life he will bring dazzling light"........nice. |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
Well done Lizzie. You do need to be careful though. The emotions can blind you sometimes and you do not get a clear picture of what you are getting. You have to be able to see with both your heart and your eyes my friend. Only when you can accept someone for who they truely are can love be everlasting. (Always remember, there are always tears and pain evn in joy an bliss) |
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childomine Senior Member
since 2000-01-25
Posts 818st. petersburg, FL |
I agree with Marilyn. You did a good job with this but, be careful. The heart has a way of blinding our other senses. ...Give me the strength to walk the soft earth, a relative to all that is.... Black Eagle Oglala Sioux holy man |
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John the cat Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 357England |
A lovely poem. I hope it all happens as you wish. |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Lovely poem ESP. I hope you'll find what you're hoping for. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
For someone who's never been in love, you seem to know what it's all about. you will know when you meet that special person. Lovely portrayal Liz |
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Broken_Winged_Angel Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 994Small Town, Somewhere |
*smiles* I wish you luck in finding the perfect man for you... and the love your peom describes so sweetly... |
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