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Chico
Member

since 2000-02-10

Posts 67

0 posted 2000-04-01 12:01 PM

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I remember the first day we met,
  I think I looked at you and frowned.
but you returned it with your smile,
  That made me feel good all around.
And I can't help but remember;
  Your eyes as they twinkled and shone.
like a bright red ember,
  That only a smile could have sown.
And I remember your dimples,
  They were so cute.
That I don't think anyone in the world,
  would have had a dispute.

And it seems totally crazy.
  now that I think about it,
That before I'd seen your smile.
  I had lived without it!
What did I used to do,
  when I felt  lonely and haunted.
And your smile wasn't there,
  to make me feel loved and wanted...
I remember looking for a smile,
  on all those lonly walks.
and all I'd seen were rats.
  in all those corn stalks.

If only i'd had your smile back then,
  My life would have been so easy,
instead of the wreak it's been.
  For now every time I am down,
your smile is there,
  To take away my frown.
And when by doubt and grief,
  I am once again being haunted.
I look to see your smile,
  To make me feel loved and wanted..
And now on my lonley walks,
  I can see you smiling at me,
through all those corn stalks.
  And when my problems,
start to get in the way.
  your smile is there.
To wipe them all away
  So smile for me one more time,
for I am feeling down.
  And I will try to learn,
to replace a smile smile with my frown

{I actually wrote this a while ago, but I wanted to post it here, just to change my topic, for a while, but to be honest with you, This poem is acutally written about avei.. (for those who know who she is, and if you don't. read some of my other poems.)
                                    CHICO

ESP
Member Elite

since 2000-01-25

Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....

1 posted 2000-04-01 03:14 AM

This is a lovely poem-doesn't matter if it is old. Poetry never goes out of date!!! Thanks for shring it with us!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie

childomine
Senior Member

since 2000-01-25

Posts 818
st. petersburg, FL

2 posted 2000-04-01 12:25 PM

This is a beautiful poem Chico. Your apparent love for Avei comes out in everything you write. I can see her smile and feel the effect it has on you. Very good.

...Give me the strength to walk the soft earth, a relative to all that is....
Black Eagle
Oglala Sioux holy man

John the cat
Member

since 2000-03-23

Posts 357
England

3 posted 2000-04-01 01:52 PM

Another good one Chico..Your deep feelings come through.

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