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blackhalo Member
since 2000-02-15
Posts 467Denver, CO |
Saying Goodbye It is always near You always try to hide You hold him so dear He is always so kind You try to let go While fighting the tears Thoughts of all that's happened Last through all of the years Friends try to explain & cease to be true You can never forget What he meant to you The pain and the tears In silence we cry Still held so dear After saying goodbye |
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John the cat Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 357England |
A lovely poem, though there is nothing I can say to make you feel better. |
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freckles Member
since 2000-02-12
Posts 160Virginia USA |
Alicia--Saying good-bye can be a very difficult thing.....I hope the pain eases for you. This is a lovely poem! "Unto thine own self be true, and it must follow as the night, the day; thou cans't not be false to any man."---Shakespeare |
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Gene Senior Member
since 2000-01-23
Posts 935Colorado, USA |
Alicia, Beautiful poem. I like the way you write. Welcome to the Pub. ~Gene [This message has been edited by u_gene (edited 03-31-2000).] |
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childomine Senior Member
since 2000-01-25
Posts 818st. petersburg, FL |
Alicia you write beautifully about a sad subject. I hope to see joy in your future poems. ...Give me the strength to walk the soft earth, a relative to all that is.... Black Eagle Oglala Sioux holy man |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is very sad, Alicia, yet very beautifully written. Denise |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Saying goodbye is never easy.....beautiful poem. Love and hugs, Lizzie  |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Sad, yet beautiful. Thanks for sharing this. |
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twinsgd Member
since 2000-02-13
Posts 416Ontario,Canada |
Lots of feelings emanating from these words Alicia...well written. Jack |
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blackhalo Member
since 2000-02-15
Posts 467Denver, CO |
Thank you all so very much for the wonderful replies and the words of hope. Alicia |
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Sasikat Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 290St. Petersburg, FL |
Alicia, I lost someone I loved very much many years ago. He was only 25 when he died. I never have said "goodbye". I say " 'til we meet again". Somehow that has helped me, and I do believe we will be together again, eternally. I wish for you to find peace and joy in your life. Sheila ...the earth and myself are of one mind. The measure of the land and the measure of our bodies are the same........... Joseph, Nez Perce Chief |
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