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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
………………The end Cataclysmic meteor strike Blackness engulfs all things Clouds of nothingness surrounds Creation Starvation, plague… to late tears Children thin and hopeless Poison air-choking searing A microbe seeps into The very heart of the living Death of conscience A mad man presses the Magnetic button Which is only his Flash melting flesh The divine hand Tilts the axis of the earth Time to die A small javelin ray Of pure sunlight Enters the black void of finality Touching the trickle Of clear cold silver Volcanic stream Trickle of hope The first unseen Catalytic unfathomed Chemical reaction Quantum generated bolts From the void An insignificant Mono cell Eden reborn The beginning…………….. Perhaps Jon Mewett |
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Sasikat Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 290St. Petersburg, FL |
Jon, This is a very powerful piece. Scary picture of what may come. Sheila ...the earth and myself are of one mind. The measure of the land and the measure of our bodies are the same........... Joseph, Nez Perce Chief |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
Yep Scared the wits out of me. I,ve seen things you people wouldn't believe. If my thought dreams could be seen They'd probably put my head in a guillotine. BD Jon |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Wow, this was intense, and so well thought out. Well, if you get guillotened we'll just serve your head on a silver platter...LOL Here's your one or two dreams were out of the other item you desired that is out of my range of thought, oh my, I hope I don't get fired...LOL |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Excellent writing, Jon! Denise |
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John the cat Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 357England |
At first I was frightened but finally felt hope. I just hope that none of us, our children or grandchildren are here to experience it. Powerful stuff John. |
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twinsgd Member
since 2000-02-13
Posts 416Ontario,Canada |
Great description Jon What goes around comes around...we need to keep things in perspective, eg. how small we are in the scheme of things. |
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Another Heather Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 93Canada |
I liked this one a lot, Jon. You picked wonderful words; each one said so much. I'll agree with the others - a pretty scary picture of things (perhaps) to come, but sometimes scary can be good.  "Be yourself... No matter what they say" - Sting |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Very powerful Jon ... and I agree, it scares me to think of this ; but you painted a vivid, realistic portrait of what could come .... Excellent work !!< !signature--> A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire! Shannon [This message has been edited by Pepper (edited 03-29-2000).] |
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childomine Senior Member
since 2000-01-25
Posts 818st. petersburg, FL |
Absolutely awesome Jon. This piece puts visions in my head and really makes me think. Frightening yet in the end you speak of hope. Very, very powerful. ...Give me the strength to walk the soft earth, a relative to all that is.... Black Eagle Oglala Sioux holy man |
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